Friday, October 12, 2007

Re-write

I am a merciless re-writer of almost everything I read or see. Usually I just say the change in my head but occasionally I share.

From last night's Big Shots:

Her: Aren't you the one who told me that dinner was just foreplay.
Him: I think we could use some foreplay.

The re-write/right way:

Her: Aren't you the one who told me that dinner was just foreplay.
Him: Turns out I like the foreplay.

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